Best, Kent Wong, author of Swimming to Freedom

Another great point!  I felt something was missing, but did not know what.  You gave me the answer. Thank you very, very much for your corrections and comments.  What a thorough job you have done. Your encouragement really helps me.  I believe my writing so far has not made you wonder why this guy wants to write a memoir in English.  This is a great comfort.  I am thinking about the memoir every day now.