I’ve only scanned the first few chapters, but your suggestions are DEAD ON! Love, love, LOVE your ideas/suggestions! You have been so fabulous to work with and I appreciate your feedback, comments, and honesty so much. I’m making lots of progress on the manuscript and I’m LOVING your suggestions. Thank you again for everything you’ve done for me. This manuscript is a million times better because of you, and I’m so grateful!
Corbin Lewars 