Michael McDermott, Author of The Patent Desk

I am learning so much through this process and can’t thank you enough. Spun quickly through your edits on the first part and once again congratulated myself on my brilliant choice of editor. Your suggestion that perhaps her parents’ ‘storybook’ meeting and engagement might set the bar too high and that’s part of why she’s reticent in romance – brilliant! Lemme see what I can do with that.